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Is it so bad to wish for a crime?
For me to want theirs, and them, back, want mine
and let me steal a kiss?
©2008-2009 ~Slim-Beatnik
:iconslim-beatnik:

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Short and sweet.

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:iconsky-less:
It would still be a crime, no?

Short, sweet, nice.
:iconslim-beatnik:
Thanks.

Hopefully it'd be less like thievery and more like passionate charity.

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There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain...
:iconirishhippiepoet:
I've been waiting for something from you.
Hm..the Robin Hood of love.

Short, sweet, perfect. Do it, if it will allow you to breathe.
:iconslim-beatnik:
Thanks.

I aughta.

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Neque porro quisquam est qui dolorem ipsum quia dolor sit amet, consectetur, adipisci velit...
There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain...
:iconennuiiunne:
You capture so much in so few words.

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I don't kiss the lines with rhythm and rhyme the way I used to.
I write with a feather sword in my own blood.
:iconslim-beatnik:
Thanks.

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Neque porro quisquam est qui dolorem ipsum quia dolor sit amet, consectetur, adipisci velit...
There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain...
:iconunforgiven-soul:
short sweet and passionate...nicely done

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~"Victums, Aren't we all?"~
:iconslim-beatnik:
Thank you.

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Neque porro quisquam est qui dolorem ipsum quia dolor sit amet, consectetur, adipisci velit...
There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain...
:icona-r-glasgow:
A kiss is just a gateway to stealing a heart. I adore this.

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Thus does the necessary angel of the poetic, arrive to save the angel of history, from dying of melancholy in a suffocating world of ruins.

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